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YourVise, November 21st, 2007, 9:49 pm


Hey, your comic looks good so far. The story seems cool too, but you might want to think about showing a little more detail in the combat to help us see whats going on. Like maybe showing the person whos attacking and the person whos getting hit.


gunryo, November 22nd, 2007, 9:30 am


good point, but you dont know who attacked Konchi, there is a small clue, but you dont find out until later XP

thanks though


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